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for Until You Lose Your Breath II

by theProphet

schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry if this posts twice, I'm having issues :P
I really feel sorry for Die, he's his own worst enemy. At least he owned up, even if it was because he knew that it wasn't going to be kept his dirty little secret.
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Kaoru should look inward before accusing Kyo of being childish. Poor Kyo, he even flat out said what the problem is and Kaoru just doesn't get it. Thanks for sharing your lovely story, enjoy your day!!
person leppgirl
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AHH!! I'm on both sides!!! but don't let them break up!!!
person leppgirl
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awe poor Die not gonna get any nookie!!! LMAO!!!!
I can just see Die begging for it haha

ms69 all you have to do is see how many hits have, that tells you something. as I type this you have 41 hits 2 of them are mine ;)

can't wait for more :)
person leppgirl
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yes!!!!

well it seems that Miyavi is faithful to Toshiya but you never know lol
awe poor Shinya, Die needs to control his drinking or his mouth or both haha

OMG poor Miyu...oh Die's in the 'doghouse' now!!!!

oh hurry with more!!!!
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a sequel! I enjoyed part one greatly and am excited to see part two. The first chapter made me very sad, tho.