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for White Nights

by theProphet

schedule March 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this story was so perfect and so rousing.
i read the first story last night and i couldnt stop to read. so i finished at 4 a.m. in the morning very tired but so moved.
and the first thought after i woke up today was...I MUST READ THE SEQUEL XD

and i done this sonce yet...don't eat breakfast or do something else..beacause i must read...and i think that means a lot..how fantastic this story is.

i like how you describe all the feelings and worries from both of them and that you focus on how they handle all the problems.
i was really touched!!
person leppgirl
schedule April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh no it's too soon to end it.... just kidding lol.....I loved every chapter sorry to see it end and so happy there was a happy ending.
schedule April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely lovely :) I'm so very glad that there was a happy ending. Those two had been through so much, they needed some happiness. For some reason, I was afraid you were going to go "Joss Whedon" on me and kill off one of my boys! Each stoplight and rain description had me on edge - I was trying to mentally prepare myself for a grisly car accident, but honestly, how can you really prepare for something like that. When they finally made it home safe, I was just that much more happy :D I really hope you tackle another project soon, I loves your stuff and you're too talented to not write!!
schedule April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Urgh! What was Die thinking!! I hope Toshiya and his mother both gave him a good (albeit gentle) slap upside the head for drunk driving. He's lucky he didn't kill someone else. Kyo's right though, he is nummy. :)**girlie crush**:) Kyo's really trying hard to get back to as close to normal as he can, I'm proud of him. I loved the kitchen scene. At first I was thinking "hmm, I kind of like Karou's mom" but then she kept talking and reminded me that no, I don't really like Karou's mom LOL... Thanks for the update, you rock! :D
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! So glad he didn't end up in prison and doubly glad he got that kind of "welcome home" from Kyo! Finally some sort of closure for the boys :D
person leppgirl
schedule February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was fantastic!!! from the fisrt word to the chessy last line!! LOL
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! 10 YEARS! I'm so anxious. Kyo's right, luck certainly hasn't been on his side so I can totally see why he'd already think he's as good as sentenced :(
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
urgh, I have so many speculations going on in my head and all of them make things worse before they'd ever get better! I think it'll be safer just to follow your lead ;)
schedule October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
person leppgirl
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
trying this again and hoping I remembered everything I wrote the fist 2 times!!!

well I was really confused, I didn't know Ru-chan's real name was Kaoru, not sure if either I overlooked it or what.
this had me thinking Kaoru (DEG) and Kyo broke up the way the story was going....so glad at that.
now....
shite! who is this lurker?!?! where was Kaoru? no wonder Kyo didn't freak at the time 1 AM (LOL) and Kaoru wasn't frantically calling him.

hurry with more.