rate_review Reviews

loved

Daww, that was a cute ending for a sweet story. I'm sorry it's over, but it was fun while it lasted :)

I read this whole fic as you were posting and I thought it was really good. There were some parts, I noticed, where your point of view went from third person (he, they, etc.) to first person (I, We). Also, some of the chapters seemed a little rushed (I am guilty of doing this myself on more than one occasion), kinda like you wanted it in the story, but were in a huge hurry to get to something else you may have planned for later within the chapter or in another one.

Overall, really good. I loved the storyline and the fact that Zack "grew up" and realized that Brian just wasn't the one for him. :)

I teared up a little. :`)
I hope our sweet Zacky finds happiness in the end, even if it's not with Brian.

poor zacky

It's always fun to write a drunk/high Zacky, lol. I'm curious to know why Brian was so persistent with his ringing. Is he now paranoid his boyfriend is doing the same thing he did? Gotta love relationship drama :) Update again soon, bitte, I also want to know why Matt is being so standoffish.

Such a great story. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Took the words right out of my mouth, lol. Update again soon, I'm all for relationship cliffhangers but this is too much to handle. =D

poor zacky!
meanie matt!

Haha! That's right, no one screw's over our Zacky, not eve Brian! Update again soon, I desperately want to see if Brian's going to follow him back to New York. =D