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August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it <3
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May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing. You should really consider writing a second story to go with this one. This has been one of the best reads in a long time. Thank you!
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May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it ^^
No plans for any continuation? :D It'd be interesting, I think :)
But anyways, loved the story :) And epilogue was funny XD lol Poor Die XD :P
No plans for any continuation? :D It'd be interesting, I think :)
But anyways, loved the story :) And epilogue was funny XD lol Poor Die XD :P
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May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read this in two nights, I really could not stop and it was good to read! Usually I like kaoru from the start, no matter what, but this time I was twisted(or is that the wrong term here? XD), because he was quite cruel, what he did (through Hideki) to Kyo.
And I felt so sorry for that guy who died, even if his part was soo short! Poor thing! X___x
The end was very cute!
I liked actually all characters "position" it matched up very good. Thank you for sharing this nice (complete) story! ^^
And I felt so sorry for that guy who died, even if his part was soo short! Poor thing! X___x
The end was very cute!
I liked actually all characters "position" it matched up very good. Thank you for sharing this nice (complete) story! ^^
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April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read all the chapters in one sitting. I love K/K together. great story.
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April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love yakuza fics and this one was fantastic! Your writing was superb and I really enjoyed the way you ended it :) One of the best fics I've read in a while.
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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's me again commenting :)))
I just have a couple of things I wanted to say.
I think now when Kaoru is letting Kyo rest from torture, Kyo will never tell anything. They almost managed to break him, they just needed some more days. But now when Kyo has one day of torture, one day to rest, then torture again, I don't think he'll ever break after having time to rest from pain. I think Kaoru should know better than that. But then, maybe he has a plan that I know nothing of...
Also, I think Kyo joked too lightly about the posibility of rape in this chapter. In the previous chapter when he had to undress in front of Kaoru, he wanted the 'humiliation to be over'. But now he as if didn't even care when Kaoru mentioned that rape was definitely on his mind...
Anyways, that's just my oppinion.... :)
As Kyo torture/kidnapping/angst is my thing, I'm waiting for more!!! :))) ^^
I just have a couple of things I wanted to say.
I think now when Kaoru is letting Kyo rest from torture, Kyo will never tell anything. They almost managed to break him, they just needed some more days. But now when Kyo has one day of torture, one day to rest, then torture again, I don't think he'll ever break after having time to rest from pain. I think Kaoru should know better than that. But then, maybe he has a plan that I know nothing of...
Also, I think Kyo joked too lightly about the posibility of rape in this chapter. In the previous chapter when he had to undress in front of Kaoru, he wanted the 'humiliation to be over'. But now he as if didn't even care when Kaoru mentioned that rape was definitely on his mind...
Anyways, that's just my oppinion.... :)
As Kyo torture/kidnapping/angst is my thing, I'm waiting for more!!! :))) ^^
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A new story! XD Yay! XD I'm really curious to read more Kyo/Kaoru interaction :) I wonder if Kaoru will always play nicely or will he roughen Kyo up as well... XD
Poor Kyo, he's barely holding up :O
I'm looking forward for more ^^
Poor Kyo, he's barely holding up :O
I'm looking forward for more ^^