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for The Paladin

by Tcharlatan

person leppgirl
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
gonna say this short and sweet.....I LOVED THIS!!
person Personne
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ah this was great again! thank you so much! great story! I was very happy, Kaoru and Dai came back alive! ^^
And you write so fast, thats super cool! Love that~
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OK, first I apologize for being tardy with my review. We were on vacation and I'm just getting caught up. Secondly... WOW!!! You packed so much action and drama into your story, I practically read it straight through. You really came across with their desperation and helplessness. I loved the character dynamics, but of course now I feel bad for Shinya because he seems so solitary as well. How funny was it that Toshiya was saying that they could have been rock stars and Die thought that was preposterous! LOL! Thanks for sharing, I hope you write more ;)
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH NO!!!!! Teaser indeed ;) Can't wait for the rest of the story!!
person leppgirl
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HEYYYYY!!!! get back here and write!!!! ;)