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for Miwaku no Zakuro

by Tcharlatan

person Warumono
schedule April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I don't even think I can type in a review what a pleasure it has been to read. Your words are so vivid, I literally couldn't put this story down and every scene was painted so real, that I felt like I was thrown right in the middle of it, to suffer everything right by all of the characters. I'm literally like... speechless, and sad that I don't have any more to read.
Keep up the great work.
schedule March 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this was such a great storie and i'm speechless right now >.<

it take me 2 days reading and i couldn't stop XD


are you planning to write a sequel? how they manage it again to live together? how the 'relationship' goes on?
person leppgirl
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM

YAY Kyo goes back to Kaoru but are not in love?!?!

complete!?!?! awe I'm going to miss this.
schedule February 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, such a gripping and heart wrenching story! On the one hand, I wanted Kyo to be able to find a life outside Kaoru's influence and find someone he could have a healthy relationship with but deep down I wished for this exact ending :) I love your writing style, it flows like poetry. I do hope you will write more!
person leppgirl
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
no! K/K needs to be together, don't 'break them up'.
person leppgirl
schedule January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh poor Kyo, the guys will find you.
poor Kaoru. yea Kaoru is 'in love'.
hurry guys!!!
schedule December 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yaay :D Shit's about to hit the fan, isn't it?

Also, this is xblue_fishx from LJ :D
person leppgirl
schedule December 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wait did Kyo get stabbed too?!?!

I'm still here keep it coming! ;)
person bec
schedule October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, the interactions between all the characters are beautiful. I am always looking forward to the next update. Thank you for a fantastic read!
person Geenevaaa
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
First of all, wow... I loved Prophet, and I am equally as impressed with this work!! You've done such a wonderful job sincerely and honestly portraying all the characters. And seriously... it's so wonderfully written from an emotional perspective. I literally held my breath sometimes because I think I was just so swept up in the story I forgot to breathe! I can't wait for an update!