rate_review Reviews

I really loved the concept behind the one-shot, because it was awesome and very sweet. However, I thought the timeline within the one-shot was a little muddled and confusing. I wish the transitions and time the story took place over was more clearly defined. Like, the italicized portion, when exactly did that take place? Was that the actual 'first' encounter? It just wasn't very clear.

Loved this. cant wait to read more of your stuff :)

loved