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for The Masquerade Ball

by GinnyWeasley80

schedule November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So honestly, I didn't think this was bad. It was pretty good and has the potential to be even better if you ever feel like going back to it. To those who don't like it, to damn bad. This isn't something I would normally read, but I would be willing to read it again. I do think it needs more descriptive language and that it seemed to jump around a little. Other then that, good job hun! ~ Astraea