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I have to agree with the other reviewer: you badly need to go in and edit this and break it into paragraphs where it should be broken. All glumped together as one giant paragraph it's just too hard to read--I quit after half a page or so, because I scrolled down to see that it was quite long and the whole thing was like this. Sorry.

It was really, really difficult to read because you didn't separate any of the dialogue or the paragraphs.