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for Vision im Spiegel

by kimbk

person keepyourselfalive
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YES! YES! I read your story 'Silence' a while back and, seriously, this is the perfect sequel. Okay. maybe not exactly a sequel but a perfect addition for Silence. The way you descibe Richard and Till(not too lingering and not too short either), their little habits,the details such as the basket thing, Richard's point of view, the length of the chapter. All good stuff :D
One thing I'm not so sure about is the fact that Till plays his own music at home as recreation. Somehow I don't think he's the type to do something like that since they're confronted so often with rammstein in other daily life, you know? But then again, that's just my opinion.

So, yes, I really enjoyed this chapter! I hope you will continue the story.