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September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story!
The characters feel natural and sufficiently fleshed out without getting too wordy. Their speech and internal dialogue help complete the image, and served to draw me in without feeling "forced".
I love the buildup! It feels like the story has a natural rhythm just like good sex.
The characters feel natural and sufficiently fleshed out without getting too wordy. Their speech and internal dialogue help complete the image, and served to draw me in without feeling "forced".
I love the buildup! It feels like the story has a natural rhythm just like good sex.