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for Emma at University

by Allyrion

person honey boo boo
schedule April 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
hello. it just wasn't sexual enough. i expected more puns and references to the harry potter franchise, for example: "would you like to play with my wand?", "how about you slytherin?" and "are you sure you're a muggle because that cock is magical" because those kinda innuendos set my goblet on fire. please edit and send me an updated piece. i will review it
schedule July 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Still good. Hope to read more. Hopefully with pregnant sex and marriage.
schedule December 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Pretty sexy, hope to read more.