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December 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hi DarklingWillow. I am so happy to see that you are still writing. You still have the magic touch. I love this short piece. I hope you will find the time to share more beautiful images and ideas with us.
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March 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to preface this by saying that of all the subdomains here on AFF, Celebrity Fiction is the one that I avoid most vigorously, most likely because this is the only subdomain that's ever made me walk away from my computer in tears, and not the good kind.
Having said that, this story is a reason to visit this subdomain, even for the gun-shy like me. This is a brilliant little gem, an excursion into poetry masquerading as prose, the deft dance of language across the canvas of imagination. You've painted a picture that's beyond vivid, beyond perfection, and I'm completely green with envy over certain turns of phrase. This is honestly one of the most moving flash fics I've ever read, with a world of nuance in such a very few, brilliantly chosen words.
This will live in my mind for a very long time, and I'm so glad you decided to share it!
Having said that, this story is a reason to visit this subdomain, even for the gun-shy like me. This is a brilliant little gem, an excursion into poetry masquerading as prose, the deft dance of language across the canvas of imagination. You've painted a picture that's beyond vivid, beyond perfection, and I'm completely green with envy over certain turns of phrase. This is honestly one of the most moving flash fics I've ever read, with a world of nuance in such a very few, brilliantly chosen words.
This will live in my mind for a very long time, and I'm so glad you decided to share it!
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March 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Um wow. I saw your thread in the forums and had to check this out.
It's beautiful that's about all I can say...
CL
It's beautiful that's about all I can say...
CL