I've never been good at reviewing things but I felt like saying that I love the story and that you have done a great job, Mal.
I'm terribly sorry you feel that way, JollyRanchers, but not every male in the world is so insecure about such things. I happen to feel that Alex is perfectly capable of satifying his women even after they've had the pleasure of other men. I appreciate your feedback even though it seems that your only intention is to upset me with your comments. I'm sure that your own fanfiction endevours are all perfectly polished masterpieces with hundreds of thousands of views and dozens of online commentors telling you how much they've enjoyed them. Please provdie a link to these works as I feel there will be a hole in my heart until I can lay my eyes upon them.
Thanks again,
-Mal
Congratulations for ruining the story. Was going so well until you had his guards gang bang Taylor Swift with their foot long cocks. You really cucked your own main character. What a fucking loser. You had one of his harem members get fucked by guys with bigger dicks than him. Such dissapointment. At this point, his guards can please 'his' woman better than he can. Just delete this shit story...
hello, I was looking forward to the new chapters on CSL and then I find three unread here. you make me struggle to keep up with you XD. However, chapters full of events, in addition to the fact that I love the turn Bella / Dove, but still does not make me go to such a great breakthrough the childish turn of Chloe, even if having her side by side with Thorne struck me. The Margot / Felicity report is very nice. I'm looking forward to reading about the next chapter and the delivery of the ring.
I really like your story; the writing, the chapter length, the behaviors of most of the characters. I think when you have a ton of girls, like in this story, it's easy to make them interchangeable and make them all the same, and you've done an incredible job of keeping them unique, especially with Ariana. She is my favorite, and I do wish she was around a bit more, but keep on doing what you're doing, it's great!
Man, can't wait for part 2.
Man, i really thought Dove was gonna become fanatical to the point she would think that Alex could do no wrong. But, at least Taylor is becoming someone I like, someone who could be really loyal to Alex. Anyway, another great chapter, i like how he's turning them to his side one-by-one. Can't wait for the next chapter and the new girls.
Now, Dove is turning into a fanatical, loyal, devoted member. She is what Emma Watson should have been. Make sure Dove isn't shared with the other the girls and only belongs to him. And she should be the most loyal of all the others.
Honestly, this erotic fiction is the greatest piece of erotic writing I've ever seen... So intracite and detailed... The introduction of Ari especially as a cat!!... Was incredible..I just wish she was Ales's private pet and only he could touch her. There is so much creative control and space with this story, new girls could come in etc. I am highly anticipating the next chapter!... I don't know if it would be available but the inclusion of celebrities such as Nena Dobrev (Vampire Diaries), Scarlet Johannson (Actress), would be phenomenal. Love your writing, there's nothing else I can find like it so keep up the incredible work man!... Can't wait for chapter 37
I would never have the balls to write something like this.
So ya gotta give the writer A for the balls. xD