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for Wings to Fly, Eyes that Burn

by Zilo

person Charlotte
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The muses are gone again huh? *mopes*
person Bobbie
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic - it really is - I'm not just saying that to make sure you finish it (finish it!)- If I was religious, I would worship you!

Seriously though, it is excellent; please don't make me wait too long for an update! Marshall's angst is just so moreish!
person Tetra
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes. I do have to agree with everyone's comments. UPDATE! and soon. The angst is killing me. Very beautifully written. The emotions are just too real. You're a good writer.
person Aissa
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just got to read this for the first time. Where have I been? I dunno how I could have missed this. I read all 20 chapters in 1 sitting! I can't believe this. I didn't know who Remy was so I had to do "research". That's how good this is. You had me intrigued.

Now I'm excited for more. There is more, right? I hope so.
person Jenna
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must be a masochist to keep on reading this. Marshall breaks my heart on every chapter. I hurt but it's a good kind of hurt. I'm glad to see that you're finally updating.

Please, hurt me more. lol!
person benzie
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you finally updated, Rosie. You were nearing my deadline. My "if-she-hasn't-updated-by-the-1-year-mark,-I'll-try-the-ignore-her-approach" deadline. ;P Good thing you didn't because that'll be difficult. Like how in the world can I ignore you? I *love* you too much to do that, girl.

Anyways... like, is it wrong for me to have this goofy smile on my face while reading this? David was laughing his ass off. He says I have this "unchanging 'awwww' look" in my face for about 10 minutes. *lol* I can't help it's just too sweet! . Marshall's all lost puppy mode and I want to cuddle him. and Remy's all... ugh. I want to cuddle with him. I am lost for words. It's just so perfect. I waited long enough and it's just well worth it.

I think my brain's just melted into mush and my heart's beating like a million beats per second. I can't stop gushing. What have you done to me? ;)

BTW, lastly, NO, you are not making me wait another 10 months for the next chapter. I'll be nagging you like crazy from hereon. I mean, 10 months! What the fuck, girl? 9 months I can take. but 10 months? Damn. There's no excuse for that.

le update. Now! *g*
person Sony Gemkuna
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this chap was so sweet, and don't worry about the muses...I completely understand...mine have left me high and dry on a few projects over the years too.
person charlotte
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gracias for this. I've been checking on here every week for almost a year and at long last you updated. God, I missed these 2. I was this close to crying when I saw that you finally updated. I'm not kidding, hon.

Please don't make us wait that long again. It was agony. I'm keeping you, Remy & Marshall in my suitcase.

Cheers. The muses are back.

Love the update, btw. oh angst!
person Xay
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! the wait is over. i now have something to thank bush for. heh. i do have to say that this is well worth it. marshall's confusion to remy's actions and his submission. remy's assurances and realization of his feelings. it's great. i want to cuddle these 2 and keep them for christmas.

i hope we wont wait that long for the next chapter. i don't know if i can handle it again.

stay muses, stay.
person xay
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think i waited long enough. and now i've finally come to terms that this will never get updated. i've spent days and months in anguish and melancholy. but now? i'm alright. it's okay. i've moved on. i've accepted that there'll never be an end. i can now move on with my life and not think about marshall and remy.

not.


please update.