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""I had a dream about y' cher. It was one of dem real dreams. The kind dat make y' forget yer in the joint. Y' an' me were havin' sex in a car durin' a snowstorm. It was a hot fuckin' dream."

I feel like this part is coming real soon. Is it? I can't wait!

Nice work on chapter 18 :-)

I was gone for a couple of days to return with such a pleasant surprise - reu reunited with Cher. Yont bnt believe how much I missed reading your stories, Zilo. I went to visit my grandmother and she didn't have internet access. I kept thinking of what has happened. I'm glad to know that Cher is now safe. Remy made sure of that. Thank goodness. The whole Max being a shapeshifter gave me the creeps. Good thing Remy was there, just in the nick of time, but still he made it. I also love the part where Remy was consoling Marsh and when he said 'don't touch me, He did. It's love. It's so smushy, I love it.

Once again, and I don't think I will ever tire saying this, this is beatiful. Excellent job.

Oh my God! Can I say cry? The last chapter made me cry. Very, very good writing.

I will never stop giving you the hugs, Zilo. What you're doing here is great. Chapter 15 is so exciting. I can't breath. I don't think I can breath until I know Cher is safe. I hope chapter 16 will be up soon.

*hugs zilo*

I saw a link to your story at Loaded Words. Decided to check it out because it's such a unique pairing and... whoa!!! It is such a ride. I read all the chapters in one sitting. And now, I need some more.

Here's looking forward to the next chapter. Good job.

OMFG!!! the suspense is killing me. hope u finish with chapter 16 soon. i hope remy finds marshall fast, i don't want anything bad happening to our cher.

oh and zilo, love u too :)

btw, i already have my journal up and going. i hope u could pass by or w/e. it's at livejournal.com/users/benzoyl

*gives zilo a hug, again*

my ever-favorite part in the series is this one:

""Y hold y'r guilt like a sickness." Remy's voice didn't match his eyes or his movements. It was roughened and full of compassion. "It starts right here." His fingers pressed into Hailie's smiling face, Marshall flinched at the touch. "An' it spreads." The arm he had pinned across Marshall's chest relaxed and the fingers spread out. "It takes a hold o' y'r heart an' twists it." "

i dunno, what u're doin to me girl... i keep coming back and i get this anxiety trip when i'm waiting for the next chapter to be posted. that's how good it is. it's like dave matthews's comment on Marshall. he said that Marshall, "grabs my heart really hard and makes me want to get up and scream."

and that's how it is with me to ur work. u've grabbed my heart. not just with this story but w/ every other story u've posted in this archive. and looks like, it's not just me considering the number of ppl reviewing ur stories and the number of hits its got. u truly aifteifted and i'm so thankful that u're sharing this wonderful talent of yours with us.

and yes, this latest chapter... it got me again. *hugs zilo*

"He liked watching his boy's face scrunch up with laughter. His dignity was worth it. "

Okay, that one broke me. This is so good. I can't wait for what's next.

OMG... I love this story so much but you know what, Zilo? Chapter 14 is definitely my favorite from it all. They've finally poured out their feelings for each other and I'm such a sucker for that. I love the smush that's going on. It gives me this feeling of butterflies.

This is so beautiful. It simply is. Thank you so much. You totally made my day. *gives zilo a hug*

found another link: http://www.urbanplayground.net/~westsyde/02-tupac_ft_notorious_b.i.g.-lp_version-xxl.mp3