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oworkwork real fast zilo so don't be sorry. u doing great with the writing. i can't believe how fast u write and it's still good. u're so talented! i really love the 'Cher' nickname. it makes me feel warm and fuzzy all over. and d 3rd image is once again beautiful.

thanks for the link Charlotte! yep! marshall's a genius. i'm so happy and so goddamn proud of him. im so grateful that I live in a time that has marshall in it. that i can witness his genius firsthand. *sniffs*

`love u cher. :)

I just love your stories especially this one. Remy and Marshall have chemistry. I really love your characterization of Marshall on this one. I like an angsty Marshall. I also love Marshall's reluctance at first on having a relationship with Remy to his acceptance. And Remy? I love him, too. He's perfect down to the speech pattern. I just love the way you give dimension to your characters. The way you write really makes this pairing alive for me.

And in this latest chapter they did it in a medical ward with someone watching them! WOW. That is so hot!!! And Cher??? OMFG!!!

Keep up the good work Zilo.

BTW, I also like your 50 cent/Em stories especially Blunts... And yes, you should listen to Dying to Live. I'm already ing ing that song on the radio and it's really good. I cried listening to it. You could almost see Marshall in his studio with his heaphones on. Nodding his head to the bass, eyes closed, with tears in his eyes. He's a genius. Without a doubt.

To Charlotte: thanks for the link. The first one worked for me. Thanks.

first it's Lil M, now it's Cher! I love it!

here's the link i used to get 'Running (Dying to Li': ':
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/ruffakarodriguezmusic.htm

i was told that this one works too:
http://tha.rotten.apple.org.ru/uvz/levi/index.htm

article bout the song: http://www.mtv.com/news/articles/1479321/20030925/2pac.jhtml?headlines=true

and yes, i'll say it again, this is just sweet! where's the next chapter? LOL! yes, i'm an impatient bitch ;)

oh this is just sweet! where's the next chapter honey? can't wait :)

btw, has anyone out there got that new song with Pac and Biggie on it that Marshall produced? it's called 'Running' and it's hot!!! i wryinrying by the time i finished listening to it. i'm telling y'all, u gotta get it. it's great. u wont believe how good marshall is now with producing.

and the chorus he chose for the track? shiiiitttt....
"Why am I fighting to live, if I 'm just living to fight?/ Why am I trying to see, when there ain't nothing in sight?/ Why am I trying to give, when no one gives me a try?/ Why am I dying to live, if I'm just living to die?"

dios mio... i love that boy.

anywayz, back to my fb. great story here. beautiful remy and marshall images, too. when's the next chapter coming?

aight, i see it now. yeah, those are beautiful. thanks for making and sharing them with us :)

sorry. i don't know how to fix the links. if you can't see them still then email me at CelticRose19@aol.com and i'll send them to you.

Those are beautiful. It's as beautiful as the story itself. I can't believe how talented you are! Really, I can't. Just keep doing what you're doing. It's all good.

I hope Remy's okay.

I also saw your story at the Slim Slash list. What draw me to it amidst all the other stories is the uniqueness of the pairing. Remy and Marshall? I was like, "How will that work?". But it did and it was a pleasant surprise. I love the story, the setting. I love the characterizations you did for our 2 protagonists and their developing relationship.

I agree with one of the reviewers. I also do not like stories that are just porn without plot. It's so refreshing to see this original piece among all those.

You have a beautiful imagination and I would like to thank you for sharing it with us.

I agree, those are beautiful images. Marshall doesn't have dark hair on the first one. I'm not really complaining though. :) You should create more. It's really beautiful.