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December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
help, what's happened, half the story's missing.
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was great! So sexy! You should write more fics about Johnny/Orlando! ;)
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, lovely!
Who wouldn't want to lurk in the shadows?
Wonderful to let Johnny keep some of that eyeliner - he does look great with it, doesn't he?
Who wouldn't want to lurk in the shadows?
Wonderful to let Johnny keep some of that eyeliner - he does look great with it, doesn't he?
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was beautifuery ery hot without the usual jarring graphic details. I thought everything felt natural here, and the sense of lust flowed throughout the entire story, beginning to end. More erotica than porn, if that makes sense at all. Someone mentioned in an earlier review their dislike of the term "elder" in reference to Depp. Personally, I thought it (and your descriptions of laugh lines) added a lot to the tangible beauty of the scene. Also loved the mention of his voice- the southern thang. ;D Very nice!
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*fans face* I think I need a cold shower after that, tee hee...*very* impressive. I love RPS. And Orli and Johnny together...*drools*
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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! You really know how to write. Everything flowed so smoothly, and it was just incredible overall.
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September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HUZZAH FOR JOHNNY'S HIGH SPERM-COUNT!
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August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your story was really going good man, but the whole elder thing kinda killed it :( which is sad cuz i really wanted to finish reading but i kept getting mental pictures of an old man! you have and awsome way of wording sttho tho so thats cool.