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for There's Always Room For...

by sunhawk

person LindaG
schedule October 30, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhh. o_O. I can't believe Darren eating that Jello... *LOL*
And Daniel, when Darren licks him. *LOL*...
Nice chapter.
person LindaG
schedule October 30, 2002 at 12:00 AM
This whole chapter is so hilarious. I wanted to comment on specific lines, but there really are too many.
I can't wait to finish this story.
person LindaG
schedule October 30, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. Daniel is in trouble now, isn't he? I'm almost surprised he's standing his ground. I half expected him to continue running around the pool, knowing Darren could never catch him that way.
person LindaG
schedule October 30, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Cute and funny little story, I enjoyed it very much.
person Linda
schedule October 29, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Sunhawk!

Woo Hoo! I don't think I've read this one before. *blushes*... Sorry.

But I am LOVING it. A pool full of jello? Is it *possible* to swim in that?
This is going to be hilarious I am sure.
Will read more soon.
person LindaG
schedule October 29, 2002 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!! Daniel should know better than to turn his back on Darren. Wonderful!
person LindaG
schedule October 29, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Loved Darren screaming about the swamp beast. Loved it!