rate_review Reviews

That was a great read. I look foward to reading the rest of the story. It caught my interest with the first few lines. Thats how you know that the whole thing is going to be wonderful. i hope a lot more people read the story. I bet they will enjoy about as much as I did. Probably more. Two thumbs up from me!

Just read the latest installment. One word: WOW! Very powerful, the characters are showing even more development. Keep writing, I Want More! =P

You know, when I read intro of your story for the first time, I decided I won't rit, it, it's not for me (whole idea seemed strange for me - brothel, murder and Darren with all the other characters...)... But somehow... hehe, I read it and I like it very much! You story is so uncommon! I'm very curious about next chapter!

OMG.....What... what a powerful... frightful chapter... I feel so bad for Darren and the ones who didn't 'participate'... yet I think I pity the ones who did...
This is one... amazing chapter, Foraoo... I look forward to the next chapter. I hope it is more... hopeful (?) than this one.
Very job job!

interesting start, i would have liked to get names on who is who because at this point i can't sort it out *giggle* Things got a little confusing during the fight, abrupt i guess is the word, but keep working on it, looks promising! :)

I love this story. Not because it has a wide variety of famous faces or for the adult content but because it's a story. There is a plot, there is atmosphere, there are things you'd never get in type of story created by another. You're talented. You should always keep writing, be it to do with adult fiction or something else but you should do it. Not many people have a talent such as yours, and you should use yours as best you can.
I'm anxious for the next chapter of this amazing creation. And also wondering if you have wrote more stories? I'd love to read them.