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for The Ordinary Prince

by GacktnoHime

person aiwaguru
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Your story seems interesting but I cannot seem to be able to visualize well chapter 2 and 3, pretty much everything is missing except for the header O.O I'm so curious to see how it goes on *_* Kyo seems to be quite fun *_*
person Lord
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, love it until now..but the last two chapters are a bit strange, just the disclaimerstuff again..Im looking forward to updates..^-^..

Lord
person whoo
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
d00ds! I can't see chapter 2, 3, and 4. ;_;

UPDATE MAHNZ! ;~;
person oijodifj
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:O That was good! ;_; But chapter 3 and 4 aren't showing... ouh, continue it please? XD
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
;___; Your chapters... gone... but since I'm a big boy, I'm not gonna cry. I'll just sit here, and mope, until you fix it. Hehehe by the way I liked it...
person Tai-Kyn
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wai! i love the story so far! unfortunately, for some reason the third and fourth chapters cut off during the warnings/summery, so you cant read them ;__; was it an accedent or is something wrong with the site? i've tried several times to make them appear, but nothing happens. can you fix it? i really want to read the rest!! ^___^
person KuroKaze89
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I liked this line. "I wanted to fix my crooked teeth before I came, but I couldn't find the damn spell for it," XD
person Keira
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Waiiiiiiiiiiiii, I loved Cricket. =D And I like this story, I dunno why - I normally loathe AU, but this one's amusing. -nodnod-
person Tomoka0013
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
=^-^= I think it's really funny, and I'd like to read more of it! Keep up the good work :D