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by Queenie

person Isaac Perez
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
my god that was fucking brilliant! It was so goddamn real, and fuckin intense. now i gotta check out some of your other work cause that was the shit!
person paul
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
danm girl (or boy lol) you have got to finish this!!!....please...maybe?
person Stacey
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good overall story... do the world a favour though and do a spell check as well as a proof read. It's hard to 'get into' a story when you stumble across tons of spelling mistakes! Good job! Love Eminem stories... especially when he's paired with Nick Carter (Backstreet Boys)!

Have a read of my story (which is no means 'perfect') "Night Dreams"

Cheers!
person boo
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! Love it.. It was sad.. *sob*
person Avon
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Without a doubt the most well-written Emslash I've ever read. I'm hooked. If I wasn't in such a rush to read the next part of the story, I'd say lots of nice things, but your writing is too enticing to resist for much longer. Must read now.

You goddess.
person Ditte
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Did you write this fic yourself? Cause a while ago I read one exactly the same just with Orlando Bloom...
person stephanie
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
holy fuck. this is probably the best story i've read on this entire site, for what it's worth. please please please write more soon!!!!
person ~cry~
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sigh... this fic's really great. Loved it.
person katie_k
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i read this sotry absolutely ages ago and its still one of my favourites. i doubt that you even look at these reviews any more cos the story was finished almost two years ago, but i thought i'd let you know anyway that someone had completely copied this piece of work - as in just changes the names to be orlando bloom and elijah wood (if it was you then just ignore this). i immediately thought this one was the original as the characters were so perfectly written and eminem was exactly how youd picture him to be, it just seemed right. the other version was really clumsy and odd because you just couldnt imagine orlando bloom talking like eminem, they didnt even bother to take out the americanisms. i cant remember where i saw that story or who did it so theres really not much point in me writing this but i just thought you should know. again, sorry if it was you or somone you gave permission to.

katie_k
person Re
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing...

It's totally OOC, I'm afraid, but... GOSH!
Best story I've read in a little while...
It's sad, it's funny, it's retic,tic, it's like a dream, it's like a cliché, it's something new... It's full of contrasts...

Maybe
the whore-boy character is overdone.
Maybe
Eminem's personality isn't captured at all.
Maybe
it's cowardly to not follow Jason's story to London.

But who cares?
I don't.

Yours is a lovely story, and that's it. End of story.