rate_review Reviews

I love this story. Well that's all I can say about it 'cause I can't think of one thing I don't like about it.

I read the whole story, and I don't know what to say....This is the first Eminem story that I have ever read. from the first chapter, I was glued. I can't believe how raw things turned out between Marshall and Jase. It was the perfect scenario. There was no way that Em could come out; even if he did somehow get Jason in his crew, who's to say that he would be happy, or that they wouldn't be found out later? When those things were explained by Jason, I could actually say that I was getting frustrated for Marshall, but I also agreed with him wholey.

The story was intense, and I can honestly say that I haven't read anything quite like this before. You and your friend Kate have a real talent for POV stories. I'm really surprised that I didn't ditch this story on the first paragraph becaususuausually LOATHE POV's, but this one really got to me. It was a unique experience.

I will never forget it.

God...
fist of all how can you end it there?!
I made me cry... gawd I'm pathetic...

But best of all... this fic was exelent, really... not just some silly slash... really emotioan, and hot at the same time... extremely great... I guess the best piece of slash I have ever read.... From the style of writing point of view as well as from the story and the dialogues... I just loved it to the bones... Just... how could you end it tehre... I'm such a horrible sort og mushy person *loL*

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Tinuviel

Your writing is absoultely flawless. Eminem is perfectly in character, and everything about this seems so honest., unlike most fanfics. You are an incredible writer, please keep it up! A+

that was wonderful. I loved it. And sad at the end. I love your writing style, please, keep it up.

I absolutly loved it!!! One of the few fics around that drew me in, I COULDN'T stop reading!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE carry on!!! Let us know what happens to Em and Jase.... I've been reading this and whispers too for hours!! I barely could bring myself to read the last word knowing there wasn't anymore!!! You are Amazing!

*bursts into histarical giggles* stories about Em being gay... *giggle* I wounder what he'd say, ne? GREAT job! ^-^ I had a friend that went by 'Dre' although she pronoced it 'Dree' instead... it was confusing o.o;; 'cuz her name was Andrea so... yeah I'm just gunna shut up now, aight?