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for The Special Christmas Present

by Legolaslover

person Siarra
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww. This fic is so cute and sweet... One of my favorite pairings and the story is nicely told, although I wish you would've paid some more attention to the grammar and especially spelling. Also a little more build up and description would make this fic really awesome.