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for Hallelujah, Lock and Load

by heartgrenade13

person Anon
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really good please continue it very soon
person Anon
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon. i love this story.
person ashley
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love you story please finish it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Sarah
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story never stop
person katt
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story ,so far. Please update soon.
person GoodbyeKitty
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I. NEED. ANOTHER.!
uber awesome.
more s'il vous plait.
person RaeofSunshine
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! Please continue, I love this story!! :) ;)
person prettypoison
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked that. I was sorta confused but it made me giggle, so... I applaude.
person GoodbyeKitty
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SADDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Me likey tho.
UPDATEY SOON.

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person Megan
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo!!! I like the way the story is going... he blamed her for not seeing his grandma.... awww... this is very good... keep writing... I would suggest ideas, but I am having writers block as well...