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for When You Go

by poe

person Cherrylips
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap...o___o
person Noelle
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome story. My eyes were glued to the screen. Poor poor Frank. Dramatic ending (I'm assuming it was over?). The sex scenes were hot and the writing of the entire story was smooth. Good work.. you fixed my MCR craving for tonight.
person silly_nut_case
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
son of a bitch i hate you, update soon okay? me like this story
person Kare Bear
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! That was the best thing I have ever read! You Rock!
person erin
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!! this is so sad!! NO PUT THE BLADE DOWN AND WALK AWAY!!!!!!! ITS NOT WORTH IT!!! hahaha...yea...ok now im sad thanks for ruining my good mood with this sad story!! but it is really good...heehee...keep writing!
person silly_nut_case
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i feel sorry for Frank... but good story, update soon okay?
person silly_nut_case
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude this is hot...
person Cherrylips
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jesus.
Poor girl.
Damn Gerard!
Mm, Franky in boxers. :D
*shifty eyes*
I can't decide who I want her to be with more.
...that's a good sign! Continue, sometime soon!
person Cherrylips
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAYYY.
Update.
This is turning out a bit sad. o_o
person erin
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh...my...god!!! i love this story!!! so good...but i cant decide who i want luca to go with more...gerard or frank!!! ahh the choices!!
heehee. i really like the way you wrote it...aweosme job!!! and plz keep writing!!! for me? hahaha...i really wanna kno what happens!!