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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's really good though sometimes i don't get it but don't worry i am retarded
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One word - spellcheck
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*jaw drops* how come she's aloud to sit in Johnnys lap to hid from Orlando! thats not fair...if I did that I would be thrown out of any place I was at! *frowns* but anyway I love it! keep it up!
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Updates make me happy. Keep up the good story.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool! More please!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finally, you updated yay. update the next chapter soon :)
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thats pretty F**king good! More please!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, the first chapter was quite honestly an 'Are You On Crack?' journey, because the writing was so frenetic and crazy that it was actually rather hard to comprehend.
The second chapter was much, much better, but still needs work. Keep going!
The second chapter was much, much better, but still needs work. Keep going!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee. I like it. Just need to spellcheck is all. Good so far.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*standing ovation*
Fantastic! Fantastic! Worthy of another chapter! Not to mention, everybody loves a hispanic girl!*wicked grin*
Kepp up the good work
Fantastic! Fantastic! Worthy of another chapter! Not to mention, everybody loves a hispanic girl!*wicked grin*
Kepp up the good work