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for love calling

by heavenleigh

person ImAFake
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story, and ive been reading through ur stories (i hope you dont mind i really didnt review. Im used to not reviewing on aff.n) and i love your writing style. just a couple things to say though, triple check for misspellings. also, in the last chappie on this story, how the heck did the room clear out so fast? i mean, one minute they are going all fluffy in front of their friends after the confrontation with jenn, and the next minute they are having sex on the couch with no one there. sorry if that sounded kinda flamey, but that kinda bugged me. besides that i love your stories!
person Huggler
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was fucking fantastic. I loved it so fucking much that if it weren't 6:30 am I'd read it all over again...it's sweet, funny, sexy, and oh so adorable.

Well done, my darling.
person TB13
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That was so touching! Jenn is such a stupid bitch and I would have kicked her ass all the way to Alaska if she had talked to one of my /friends/partners/relatives/ect. like that and I wouldn't even feel bad about it!

Please continue! Please,please,please!
person Anon
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol i'm reviewing! Story is fucking fabulous. I was wonering what was gunna happen. You're a great writer! ^ ^
person Cydne
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD i am obsessed with your story it's driving me insane.. lol but i'm serious its soo awesome XD heyy when are you gonna update? cause i think its awesome but then again thats my opinion of some sort...but i'm a rabid yaoi fan...but i love it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much ahh please update your story made me fell sooo happy i'm happy some one likes ville and bam together as much as i do soo yeah ohhh if you wanna see bam with a girl not famous more like a personal story theres this story on quizilla http://quizilla.com/users/TequilaBodyShots/quizzes/Wham%20Bam%20Thank%20You%20Ma'am%20~A%20Bam%20Margera%20Story~%20Info%5CPart%201/ umm yeah just copy and paste in the address bar and your there...oh..stupid me you already know that but i'm still in love with your story XD
person Rai
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Poor Bam though, that's rough.
I can't wait for the next Chapter, this is a really good story.
person Anon
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i no thats a good way to end but i really really want to get some ville vs jenn bitch fighting action it wud be oh so fun make him keep his promise about breaking her wrist!
person Pyra
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh.My.Fucking.God.*Pause* I think I love you......
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, excellent update.
^-^
person KarinVam
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh love that suprised me! I didn't know you were gonne update today =D!! YAY!
That was sooo sweet I could cry! Omg I'm so glad Bam rejected Jenn cause I was freaking out!You evil woman you! But thank god Ville is Bam's true love *sign* Oh yeah! I almost chocked on my tea when I read the 'I kinda worked that out when he had his dick in my ass' comments! You almost killed me! But I loved it cause I laughed so hard, my desk is all wet with tea LOL
Wonderful chap doll, and if it's the end it would be the perfect ending, but I'll always be begging for more! You know it!
Talk to you soon! Kisses!