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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, happy dazes are good.
It's cold as Hell where I am, but this made me feel all warm inside. And I don't understand that cliché, because Hell is NOT cold...
Anyway, great chapter, can't wait for more.
-x-Valo
It's cold as Hell where I am, but this made me feel all warm inside. And I don't understand that cliché, because Hell is NOT cold...
Anyway, great chapter, can't wait for more.
-x-Valo
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*whistles* Damn that really caught me by surprise!
Nice chapter though... Trust me it's not aweful I think this is a really great story. :D
Really nice Keep up the great work! X3
Nice chapter though... Trust me it's not aweful I think this is a really great story. :D
Really nice Keep up the great work! X3
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, just ran across with your story, was curious when I found that there was fanfiction of HIM. It's good :)
Um, just noticed that you had one Finnish sentence there; Epäaito, minä vihata sinä" and if you wanted to say 'Bastard, I hate you.' This would be more correct; "Paskiainen, mä vihaan sua!" Or if you would want more written Finnish then; Paskiainen, minä vihaan sinua.' But I would use the first one.
Um anyway, I though I just tell you this in my review, I've done similar mistakes when translating from English to French for example and I was glad to have help from a person who spoke French, thought I could offer my help here. =)
Alright I'll return to your story now.
Um, just noticed that you had one Finnish sentence there; Epäaito, minä vihata sinä" and if you wanted to say 'Bastard, I hate you.' This would be more correct; "Paskiainen, mä vihaan sua!" Or if you would want more written Finnish then; Paskiainen, minä vihaan sinua.' But I would use the first one.
Um anyway, I though I just tell you this in my review, I've done similar mistakes when translating from English to French for example and I was glad to have help from a person who spoke French, thought I could offer my help here. =)
Alright I'll return to your story now.
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Baby...GAH!! You know how much I love this but I'll say it again! The whole balance of doubts and hotness is just perfect I so can't wait for more, and you know I am your biggest fan!
And you don't owe me angel, I owe you!!
All my love!
And you don't owe me angel, I owe you!!
All my love!
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squeal* YES YES YES!!!!!!!! That was soooo awesome girl!!!! Hahaahah i wonder whats going to happen when they both go back to school? Hmmmmmm will Bam desert Ville when he gets beat up or will he beat the shit outta them for it!!!! Ohhh the suspention is building!!!!YAY!!!!!!!!! Cant wait for more!!!! I love u woman!!!!!!!!!
Your loyal fan, always,,
~Pyra~
Your loyal fan, always,,
~Pyra~
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally,some sex! Great,I can't wait for what happens next!
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Hunny i think i luv yoo!!!!!!! *mauls you* YAY!!!!!! Thanx for doing that sooooooooooooo much!!!!! Hahahaha cant wait to see what happens to Ville and his reaction to Bam now!!!!! You are a terriffic writer you know that right?! RIGHT!!!! I absolutly luved your Christmas fic!!!!!!!!!! Yoo are my hero!!!!!!!! ^.^
Cant wait to read more from yoo!!!!!
~Pyra~
Cant wait to read more from yoo!!!!!
~Pyra~
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy crap this chapter is soooo good. I will bearly be able to wait for more. Damn, Bam is so sexy and the part about Ville watching him in the doorway is the perfect cliffhanger.
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god drama lol good chapter make ville go in there! lol bam abd ville sexings!