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for Teardrop In The Fire

by MysticNight

schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hilikus, Gena, Julie! thank youzzz for the reviewss!:)lol I'm actually in my Psyc Lecture updating this! But anyway I'd like to thank and give a shout out LexArT as well for the kind words! im glad you liked what you read:)

Take care, have an awesome day and i'll keep you all postedd! :)
person LexMarz
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay so I've finally read it till the last chapter.
and i gotta say, you left me on the edge.
you really need to come and write more for this killer ass story.

much much reps to you, love.


Lex=]
person LexMarz
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I've read up to chapter eight.
And I seriously gotta say.
ILOVEIT.

not only do I adore the band Incubus and Brandon Boyd [hot stuff!!]

you're a very talented writer, and I'll continue to read on, after much needed rest.
expect another review as soon as I'm done.

Lex=]
person gena08
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was kinda mean of brandon..but oh well...man i hate when people get pregnant before they re meant for it...it just messes up everything especially for the girl...anyway we dont really know if she is yet do we...i just hope they can get pst this..update soon...glad to know you re okay..cheers
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol, the dialogue at the beginning about claire still being a virgin was HILARIOUS :D

" i didn't fuck myself, you know" :D


as for their argument.. i thought you did a pretty good job writing it. it's comprehensible why they are acting the way they do, after all and it doesen't always have to be rainbows and butterflies x)
person hilikus
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh..my..no... :(
can't say more to that...but noooooooo. :(
uhhh...what the hell?! all because of that michael ass!
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey everyone:) Just popped in to let you know i'll be posting another chapter by tomorrow or latest monday. For the first week back at uni...it's been totally kicking my ass and beyond exhausting compared to the months i had off! not to mention it's suppose to be 'the hardest year ever'-which I am now thoroughly believing. Gena i totally dont want you or any one else to be hesitant in expressing what you feel about the characters! i dont take it as you telling me how to write my fic, actually i truly enjoy the input:) And thanks to all who reviewed this week! appreciated as always! *hugz for all*

Anyway, til the next 24-48 hourz.

Cilla-_-
person gena08
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heyyy..so glad to hear that everything s ok with you..i didnt think you had abandoned the story but i was worried something else was up. Oh no she cant be pregnant! Pleaseeeee pleaseeee pleaseeeee i begggg you pleasssee may she not turn out to be pregnant. Its too soon in their relationship and she s kinda young. Haha im not trying to tell you how to write your story but im reli worried now for her character. Besides being so young she and brandon have only just started getting to know each other in a romantic way and she s just freed herself from a horrible relaionship.But besides that i still think your story in general and writing is wonderful and again, thanks so much for writing this story. I just hope Claire has a chance to be her person, without a kid. Lol hope you update soon!!!
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haaaa, i knew it, i knew it! wohoo!!! awesome! yay for pregnancy! but why isn't at least brandon happy about that kind of news? claire however is reacting just the way i thought she would :D


i absoulutely looooved brandon saying that if marissa had shot claire, she would have been in a body bag next!!!


i'm so glad you're alright and that everything is fine!
person hilikus
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love brandon's last comment...uh please don't let her be pregnant, not that early of the relationship. a little later but not now. huh? well whatever you do i sure keep reading it cause i'm gonna love it anyway. but greaaaat update, good that everything is ok with you. :)