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for Teardrop In The Fire

by MysticNight

person gena08
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi..uh yeah im kinda worried now myself...2 people seem to think something s up so just wanted to enquire if everythings ok with you. Even if you have nt finished the new chapter or ur reli busy its cool but if you could just post a note or summin so we know evrythings good?
person hilikus
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm kinda worried now...
person gena08
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally that thing, that marissa is gone...shame she had to die though...its sweet to see Claire's interaction with her bro. I suspect however that its not goin to be so easy for Brandon and claire from now with michael still in the picture
person hilikus
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey there, long time no update? as julie said hope everything is going alright with you. would be a shame if you don't continue that great story. :) cheers
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, that last chapter was... different but definitely awesome - as always x)

however, i thought there'd be an update by now.. are you alright? :/ i hope you are ó.ò

person hilikus
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dooossshh...sorry for reviewing that late, my pc was out of order.
great chapter, little bit terrifying cause of marissa being a psycho-stalker but great!!
continue pretty soon!
awesome story
person gena08
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sorry have nt reviewd in ages...havent had pc access..that was hottt...and i even read it at 4:15 am as well...is nt that strange? lolz...
person hilikus
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woah shit...i think marissa and michael should get together both of them seem to like all that violence what is going on...huh...
good update!! thanks very much for writing this. hope you update soon!
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“You always gotta remember that there’s the good pee-nus vs. the evil pee-nus.”

great xDD

as always i loved the chapter x)


but oh my, what a cliffhanger... oO
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what happened to the new chapter? :'(