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for Teardrop In The Fire

by MysticNight

schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks ladies! I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'll be sure to update as soon as I get another chance.

Take care:)
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! That chapter was absolutely amazing. I am so glad the they are together now. They just need to ditch Marissa and Michael! Can't wait for more!!
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well - that was worth the waiting.



x)

beautiful!



by the end of the chapter i had almost forgotten about marissa sending michael these pictures of claire and brandon... that bitch :/
person hilikus
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy shit...that was good ;)
thank you very much for the update!
hope to get new stuff pretty soon!
good work,...
person hilikus
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update? *puppyeyeslook*
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i second that! =)
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read all 15 chapters. I loved it! I completely connected with the characters. I can't wait to read the rest of it!
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was the greatest chapter ever!!!


i *adore* how brandon and claire are behaving when around each other!

you're a genius =)

as for the person watching them.. i suppose it's either michael or marissa. but it doesn't matter because either way i'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
would be great if marissa realizes that she isn't needed anymore ;o)

but i'm also excited how brandon would react when directly confronted with michael.. =O (punch-up, punch-up!! XD)
person hilikus
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i second the review above mine ;)
i wonder who it is...?? grrrr....i'm getting all excited now, you can't just end the chapter with a cliffhanger!!
please update soon!
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!

What a stunning chapter..

That kiss... and Claire told him what is going on at last...

I'm currently at a loss of words :'O


Beautiful!