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YAY, new chapteeer x)

great as always!

how dare michael follow claire or bother her with phone calls like this :/

he's an asshole :/



but if brandon actually overheard claire's first conversation with michael he hides it pretty well .__.


still, that part where brandon and claire are talking after she left the bus is soo really sad..

i don't want them to argue :/





and what about that little hint at the end of the chapter x)


”I'm just saying you need to deal with how you feel about Claire, just as much as she needs to deal with her feelings for you.”


could it be the two of them are seeing each other as something more than just a friend ??!! ;o)

Brandon is so hard to figure out! lol gawd! poor Claire, but then again actions have consequences!

You better continue to update! im like addicted to this fic!

gr8 chappie!:D

pleeeeease update ://


i go here at least 3 times a day hoping to see a link to chapter 12... and everytime my hopes are deceived :'( :'(

heya it s gena again...so sorry did nt get a chance to read your story earlier...anyway im so pleasantly surprised that you actually updated..i feared you were nt cause t was taking so long..anyway great chapter i cant wait to see what happens between her and brandon ;)...keep it up

new chapteeeeer!! x)


wow, that totally made my day. ^^

i'm excited how brandon is going to react, now that he has overheard claire's phone call. i want them to reconcile again :)

Brilliant!!!

I spent all afternoon reading your story and I really really like it (:

Usually, when I read stories like this I tend to get annoyed by the female main character really fast but Claire is just different... I totally feel for her.

And how cute is Brandon?! x)


Please update the story as soon as you can. I am addicted to it xD


(sorry for spelling mistakes and stuff ... I'm from Germany)

hey you FINALLY updated...that was a better chapter it was good that claire is visiting them so i hope there s some brandon-claire interaction coming up ;)...arghhhh i still want to kill micheal...update soon!

Hey Priscilla, i actually saw the review from nora a couple days back and i totally get why you had to put her in her place. It was really rude.
I've had a couple encounters with incubus fans who felt either they had to prove by info they knew about the band that they were a bigger fans and everyone else was inferior to them. It's just dumb, i dont see why the hell it matters who's a 'bigger fan' and who 'knows more'. But anyway i hope you dont let her being stupid stop you from writing, because personally i like it a lot!
hope to see more!
Lexi

Firstly I’d like to thank those who took the time out to read the fic and respond, it truly means a lot. Secondly, I’d like to address NORA, who felt it was necessary to let everyone know what a big incubus fan she is and how much she hated my fic and what the band would have thought if they read it among other words.

Nora, i don’t recall begging your ignorant ass to read and review, and i also believe that you had the option to stop reading whenever you wanted to.
I understand that you didn’t like it and that's fine because it's your opinion and i honestly wouldn’t have minded if it was constructive criticism, but you decided to bring your bitch ass over here trying throw around insults.
If you have an issue with my writing go rant about it in a fucking blog or something, but get out of here with that shit and try your best not to come back.

Cilla:)

PS: for those of you who read it/like it/w.e, expect another chapter by tomorrow:) L8er!

I love this story! Please update as soon as you can!!!!