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for Teardrop In The Fire

by MysticNight

person gena
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i truly DESPISE micheal..he is the biggest prick in the universe yet she goes and sleeps with him of all guys...damn why does claire have to be such a fool grrr...anyway pls update soon
person linda
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Brandon, but he is right. he didnt do shit so he shouldnt be obligated to care!
And claire is just being str8 up dumb, totally agree with gena on that.
person gena
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey...nice new chappie but i must say the way claire allows micheal to control her like that is just annoying...but i guess she has her reasons as welll...argghh plss get rid of that jackass the sooner the better..besides that keep up the good work and happy new year...cheeers
person Mary
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing, i like it.
person caroline
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm luvin it! Michael really is a prick. Hopefully she find he nerve to leave him before it becomes too late.

Keep writing:)
person gena
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes its a good story you should really continue...however i truly despise micheal
person Laila
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like it! i've never been able to find an Incubus fanfic! So im happy u added one. Also, i luv the way u put a bit of info about each character. Keep writing!