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oh no! they can't be fighting! ...or can they? hmm....yay for updates!

OH no! I can't wait to find out what happens! Great update! Can;t wait for more!
~Kate

WOWWW
that was intense!!! i love where this story is going...i wonder whats going on with Carrie and why she doesnt want to talk about her dad!... cant wait for the next one!

Sweet jesus. You guys are updating almost as fast as I blink. It's been like a quadruple update day for me. Happy you’re still alive though. I'm so damn glad Kelly didn't freak out on Carrie when she asked about her dad. Lmao, there's a commandment about not scaring people in a church. The girl with the mean set of pipes was totally Kelly, huh? Ya know, I can play any type of keyboard instrument and I can read music faster than I can read english but I haven't the slightest clue what chords or scares really are. Like I know what a concert B flat scale is because that was the band warm up every day for 4 years and a B flat chord is B flat, D, and G, right? Wow, I think I spoke too soon about Kelly freaking out. Only this time it was Carrie's fault. The girls are growing up nicely, I see. Insert the eye roll here. Wonder why Carrie spazed out so badly. Could it be that Carrie resents her dad for making them move? Seriously though, the girls have only known each other for what, 3 days, and they've already gotten into two fights. Raging PMS?

Well, first off, I'm glad to hear y'all survived the storm with no major damage. Yay for that. Thanks for taking the time to update! Now, to the story...I love teenage Kelly for some reason. (Well, really, I love all Kellys, but you know....anyway). Can't wait to see how the dinner with the 'rents goes and how Carrie's gonna be around the other girls over the weekend.

such an adorable story. continue please? woop woop!

great update..i loooovveedd it...i hope everything works out with at your sisters...and i reallly really hope you get the internetworking!!! lol

Fuck gustav. It looks like he's gonna nail all of Louisiana or at least pulverize the southern part. I hope your house makes it through. Haha, that's awesome, three band geeks interested the same almost unknown pairing. What're the odds? lol, I think I'm kinda jealous, marching band created my most awesomest times in high school and the ability to be in it for six years would've been heaven. Those beginning three lines were great. Leave it up to Carrie to have some obscenities yelled at her the first time she goes to a shady neighborhood. Haha, I was right! Kelly was running around naked. What's up with Kelly and stay dogs? It's like a reoccurring theme here. Kelly, Kelly, Kelly. That girl is a hot mess. Awww, that was cute how she got nervous asking Carrie to come to girls night. I wonder what a night like that would consist of. Cow tipping maybe?

I hope you got to your sister's safely. It was sweet of you to update before you left :) I'm a update behind, but I liked seeing the contrast of Kelly and Carrie's home lives. I liked that Carrie got Kelly to agree to picking her up in the morning, that was cool. I wasn't surprised when Kelly fell asleep at her desk, or how sad she was over having to find the dog's owner. Jeanne seems nice in this story- a little stressed, but single mom's are stressed, so that's understandable. When Kelly brought up the girl's night out and didn't ask Carrie, I admit I got a little sad. Though Carrie probably would have not gone if Kelly had asked in front of Ashley, or maybe I'm just assuming. Anyway, I am still enjoying how this one is moving along. Hope you and your family are/weren't affected by Gustav, other than evacuating I mean.

this is definitely a story i'm going to be checking up on. please continue soon! i love the whole carrie/kelly thing. i think they're adorable together. nice work!