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aw I think it's coming the scene I was so eagerly waiting for for months. I'm so so so excited. Hope this moment won't get ruined by Carries mom or something like this. Please let it not.

Woah there is so much tension and hm how do I call it? it is just so so amazing how Kelly and Carrie fit in this fiction. Their kissing scenes are so sexy and hot and i'm always waiting for the moment where Carries is gonna lose it and stops thinking. And this chapter is giving us a good idea that it will happen soon and I am so excited 'cause this fiction is absolutely great. So well written. I hope the update comes soon.
Oh and sorry my english probably really sucks.. I'm figuring out how to review in english but it's quite harder than writing texts where you don't need so much different words for great ^^' But be aware of the fact that I really love all of your fictions they rock.

haha way to go carrie, you tell ashley.... kelly and carrie are so cute together, they are so in love and so gonna hook up sooner or later.....great update thanks

It's April already? Wow. Oh Carrie, that's sneaky. "I also wish I would've known you when all that stuff with your parents happened," Me thinks life would have been a whole lot gayer. Ashley's just trying to get some Kelly lovin that she hasn't gotten in a while. Plus, it's part of that whole predatory thing some girls have. Spooky. "then Ashley hangs out with Jebbie and Boo when they aren't locked in some room, sucking face." That's be funny if she did hang with them while locked in a room somewhere. Awww, my little heart bursted with joy at the whole cupcake/birthday thing.

Again, still loving this story, especially how well written it is. You make possibly mundane events/situations really interesting and a joy to read. Having Carrie remember Kelly's favourite flowers was a very nice touch :) Keep up the awesome work!

Huh, it seems Ashley's getting jealous of Carrie as well. ROFL, the chef owned that guys ass. Whooooa. That bit of "teaching" was particularly inspiring. lol, it seems both sets of girls in this fic and Love Quotes have the same unacknowledgment going on. Except this one has that they won't even admit it out loud or maybe it's just so kind of unspoken agreement. Either way it adds that underlying fear and attraction. "Yea, but my dad's gay, so as far as I'm concerned, we're all adopted.""Or dropped off by aliens," Laughed my ass off at that and the whole end part.

Very well-written. I really loved it. They are getting so close & I wonder how long it will take them before they realize that they are in love with each other. I think that Kelly's mom & Carrie's dad both see the signs. Great job.

i especially loved the parts about kelly's childhood. like i said- beautiful. her mom going into her room and watching them sleep is such a simple scene but you gave it so much depth. great job! i really can't wait for the next chapter(as always).

beautiful. :)

Aww, look at that. She already can't sleep without the future wifey in the same bed, lol. Oh even better they both don't sleep too well. I loved that little insight on Jeanne and Kelly's life before Carrie. It's a nice touch. Such lucky girls, I wish skipping would have been that easy for me. Of course Carrie found the loophole. They'd probably die without out of school contact for two weeks. Lmao, at Kelly throwing the bible through a window. Oh Carrie... is that a hint of jealously being detected in your actions? Does she not realize Ashley ain't got a snowballs chance in hell with Kelly?