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Kelly gets Shakespeare, but not what's going on around her? lol I don't think she was hard on Ashley, and I don't think that it was too bad that Ashley didn't meet up with Kelly after class. She's way too jealous to actually go over and be nice, plus she's hurt about Kelly not liking her, so I thought it was a good thing that she didn't go over. That said, I didn't like how she went off about Carrie, Kelly was right. I liked the lunchtime scene in the cafeteria, and Carrie's joke/sarcasm. The one thing that really sucks is that while Carole doesn't even like Carrie playing softball, she's going to have a chance to talk badly about Kelly again because of not being able to play. She knew what time Carrie left and all :( Cool update.

i like that Kelly's friends are looking out for her and all, but I kinda wonder if someone should be telling Carrie to watch out. I mean Kelly doesn't even get why it might not be a good idea to kiss while laying on the bed, lol. At this point it seems more likely that Carrie's the one who is gonna get hurt lol. I'm not saying that Kelly doesn't care, because she obviously likes Carrie. Just yeah, Carrie seems more open about her thoughts than Kelly does.

"Jessica nodded, not pointing out that her logic and most seventeen year old's logic differed greatly..."

loved that line

fantastic chapter...they're so like a little married couple! love it

Okay, so don't take this as me being a whiney/annoying nagging little bitch but you should definitely try to update this stuff more often 'cause I might possibly be just a little bit addicted to it and that might be why it feels like I haven't read these in a while but yeah, shutting up now. Whoa, I can't believe Kelly actually told someone she's kissing Carrie. That whole kissing you makes me happy thing is totally their subtle way of saying they're crushing on each other big time. Lol, Carrie wouldn't be able to control herself having Kelly laid out would she? I don't think so. Oh no. Maybe Carrie's mom won't even have noticed she never came home.

I have spent the last week reading all of your work, and I must say, I'm saddened I just found these now. They are all amazing. I'm loving Kelly and Carrie in high school, it presents new challenges for them to overcome in a setting with no Idol. The ease they have with one another is stunning, and the quips and smart alec comments are hysterical. I love this, and can't wait to see what happens with Kelly and Carrie dealing with Ashley and Carole as the story progresses. Stellar job so far.

I thought it was funny Carrie was having some difficulties with Kelly shifting around, so she pulls Kelly on top of her... I guess she was preoccupied and all, but that certainly wouldn't have helped me. I thought it was funny that they were talking about Carole calling Carrie sweetie. I love that Kelly will be polite to a certain extent, but that she has a definite line when it comes to people talking about her family. I thought it was cute that Kelly kissed Carrie because she wanted to.

Oh man such sexual tension. I love it. Carole's an uber bitch. I'm glad Kelly kept her composure for as long as she did 'cause those digs at her intelligence were oh so low. Pretty ignorant of her to try and tell someone she barely knows what to do with their life. That last bit where Kelly and Carrie were in her room was too cute. They should have more of those moments in the future.

...really, there are no words to describe the amazing-ness that is kelly and carrie together.

I love that Kelly has someone else to talk. Still love that you incorporate actual events, hahaha. Is it wrong that I kinda loled when Ashley told Kelly she was gay? I did feel a little bit bad for Ashley 'cause ya know shot through the heart and all but then I remembered that Kelly destined to be with Carrie so I made myself feel better. "Carrie struggled to be respectful and not dwell on the picture in her mind of Kelly sitting there without a shirt." Hahahahahahaha. Oh Carrie. And it only got better when she told Kelly to take her clothes off. Soooooo clueless.