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for The Secrets Between us

by writer101

person Violence
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn, knocked two of them out in one shot. Either way I loved how this one ended as well is not for the simple fact that it's a happy ending. You have no idea how much I love happy endings. After many, many years of reading decent stories with angsty endings that pretty much kill all my love for the story, it gets old and repetitive. But fuck, I can never get tired of a happy ending. This one was too cute, I had a happy grin on my face by the end. Thank you for being great.
person ctallent
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great ending to this story as well, and yes on a sequel...thanks for the updates on all four stories...
person Violence
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Babies! “Kelly am I crazy or does she look like you.” Lololol. It actually wasn't that guy that got Carrie pregnant, it was really Kelly and her mystical impregnating powers. Overall, this chapter was plain fucking adorable.
person ctallent
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aw the babies are here now...very sweet update, kelly seems sooo happy...great ending too..cant wait for more
person Violence
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
BABY TIME. She gettin' a c-section or are they gonna come out the normal? If they're coming out the normal way then Kelly's hand will undoubtably be broken when it's all over, lol.
person ctallent
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aw sweet update, so the kids are coming... poor girls they are in for it.....
person Violence
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW!! That Carrie/Jeanne bonding was so damn cute. I could burst. It's nice to know the girl have Reba and Jeanne there telling they won't fuck up.
person greens28
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update. Great job
person Violence
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Waddling pregnant women always make me laugh. LOL everyone's always commenting on the one thing that pisses Carrie off the most. Also chuckled at the fact that they make this fucking exam table so high for pregnant women who generally can't do any movement other than walking. Can't wait til them little suckers pop out. They're gonna be the cutest, most dysfunctional family ever. Last two lines were really adorable.
person ctallent
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol poor kelly... now the fun begins haha great update cant wait for the next one