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for The Secrets Between us

by writer101

person Violence
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO. "yes yes....an assertive Carrie makes my daughter hot...I’m very proud but now’s not the time for that ....we have visitors." Hahahah, Jeanne's such a funny lady. That was sweet of Reba to bring them a baby book already. I love that Kelly's so into having the baby, it's cute.
person ctallent
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very good update... reba seemed pretty shocked lol....
person Violence
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, that was beautiful. The ending was my favorite though. The whole talk about kids was too adorable.
person Violence
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! I'm happy to say I'm once again pleasantly surprised at their reactions. It was beautiful. I'm so proud of them, especially Carrie for saying she was gonna tell the world how madly in love with Kelly she is. And Kelly's raction was too cute. "It was time the world knew that Carrie Underwood was in love with Kelly Clarkson." I agree.
person Violence
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That woman is the spawn of satan. Going to the media will only fuck everyone over in the end. I hope it's her mom that Carrie's calling so she can give her a verbal lashing.
person greens28
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Romantic & loving. Great job & very sexy also. The love scene was beautiful.
person ctallent
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol, very sweet and funny chapter... why do i have the feeling that clive is up to something... they need a new record company pronto....
person Violence
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whoa, look at Jeanne being all sweet and supportive. Yay. Kelly was pretty subtle with the 'you can't help who you fall in love with' line. LOL at the end conversation of Kelly/Carrie. hilarious.
person ctallent
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aw sweet chapter.... im glad kelly is excited now and it seems she will be right there with carrie.... hopefully clive the asshole wont mess things up between them....
person ctallent
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay, kelly is sticking by her.... thanks for the updates....