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for The Secrets Between us

by writer101

person ctallent
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay, jeanne didnt kill carrie... hopefully jason will come around.... great update, things are looking up for them...
person Violence
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jeanne's pretty calm about Kelly, hell I'd go as far as saying she's being nonchalant about it. Lol, at least she gave them a warning before walking in. Loved the sentiment of the last two lines. It's nice to know they'll be sticking by each other. And haha at Jason screwing himself over by also getting caught.
person ctallent
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i am glad jeanne didnt kill them. hopefully she will be nice to carrie, and i am glad that kelly is standing by carrie...
person greens28
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man, Kelly's mom is there...what a low blow from Jason calling her..& what do they all have against Carrie anyway? It's not like Kelly is perfect. u really know how to write some MAJOR DRAMA!!! Love it.
person ctallent
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay kelly, fight for your girl dont let them change your mind.... and poor carrie that has got to suck....
person Violence
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. First part left me in a puddle. Hahahah, that's right bring in Jeanne. *rubs hands* This oughta be good. And Jason's being a little bitch, lol.
person ctallent
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
jason needs to mind his own business, they just now got back together and he is gonna screw things up.... maybe kelly loves carrie enough to fight for her....
person Violence
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a dumbass. His plan should either backfire or go too well. Teach him a lesson. I love that Carrie was watching Kelly. And I also loved how she acknowledged that they're in love but not ready to be labeled and outed. It's bitter sweet.
person Violence
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I honestly thought Kelly would freak the fuck out. I can gladly say that I'm pleasantly surpirised. It feels damn good to be wrong sometimes. Glad they're back together. Oh damn son. Ashley and Jason are secretly together too? Awesome. Those Clarksons need to learn to communicate though, lol. This also makes Ashley even more open though which should do Kelly and Carrie some good in the future.
person ctallent
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
carrie needs to confess the whole clive thing and kelly needs to just tell her she still loves her.... cant wait for an update....