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for The Secrets Between us

by writer101

person greens28
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!! U are on a writing roll. Updating All your stories like 3 days in a row...that is awesome. The creative juices must really be flowing. Very sweet...but I think hell is going to break loose when Kelly wakes up the next day & when they both find out Kelly has been set up on a blind date. I smell DRAMA!!! Well, I am off to read your other updates..
person greens28
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just read the latest update to all your fics...& U did not dissappoint me at all. Awesome job-all the way around. Carrie needs to tell Kelly the truth about Clive. Keep going...
person Violence
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*facepalm* Jason is an idiot. Oh no. Carrie you had better be sleeping on the couch or in another bedroom if you want to still be alive the next morning. For some odd reason I just don't picture this going over too well. Although an inebriated Kelly who seems to be pushing all her inhibitions aside could make for an interesting conversation.
person Violence
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
At least Jason and Ashley aren't freaking out too badly. Aw, they fell fast and hard. But that only makes me more eager to know what the hell Carrie promised Clive and what she did run Kelly out of her life. hmm, wonder who that is in her room. Although i'm banking on good ole KC it could be one of those creepy ex's Carrie's got floating around.
person Violence
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That's gotta be at the very least mildly scary to have Clive Davis anywhere near your bedroom. Just a suggestion but would it be too much to ask for clive to "accidentally" fall down a flight of stairs? 'Cause he is a major douchebag. Yo, what's up with the whole drinking thing? does she have an actual problem (although not very probable) or was it just a way for start pushing Kelly from her life? And the plot only thickens.
person greens28
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am still loving this fic. It is cute & fun. I just have one little request. Can you please use a Capital letter for the first letter of their names when U refer to Carrie & Kelly-at least for me it makes the fic easier to read? Thanks a lot. Great update.
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this one! It's time for some hot action between my 2 favorite girls. Well written-please update soon.
person Violence
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol, Ashley's always getting the front row seats to the Kelly/Carrie make out moments. Oh hell yeah. Now I'm really intrigued about how Clive has yet again managed to screw with Kelly's life and has apparently started screwing with Carrie's life as well. Carrie's too sweet sometimes. She's always taking the hits which I actually prefer to Kelly taking the hits. Carrie's totally the emotionally stable and stronger one. Touring is gonna make one of them break, I can feel it.
person sugar
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm intrigued. i love broken-carrie :P
person greens28
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just had achance to review your second update & I really liked it. I love how you are developing this secret between Carrie /Kelly. I also loved the reference to BHC-one of my fav Carrie songs. I look forward to reading more. Awesome job!!!